| = mh | Bea3x [23.Nov.02 16:49] |
| O epistola...grozav de lunga...si prea banala pentru a fi considerata poezie... Imi pare rau, sunt sigura ca scrii din sentiment, se simte sentimentul, insa transpunerea sa artistica lasa de dorit... | |
| = de'acu 20 de ani | nu brublem [23.Nov.02 17:27] |
| cred ca peter green a zis-o ceva mai concis intr-un cantecel de-al lui, destul de neaos, de altfel: "Would you love me tomorrow, Like you say you love me now When the flames of the flash have stopped burning And the fire of our love have cooled down. Too many times i've given too much Baby, please give me your love in return Give me your mind and your heart And don't you leave me with a love that burns. Don't you use me as your fool, 'Cause my heart can't take another lie And if you can't love me tomorrow, Please leave me now, in my rule to cry" | |
| = frumos | ADELISSE [02.Dec.02 04:22] |
| nu transpunerea artistica are importanta intr-o descriere de-din sentiment(daca imi este permis sa o contrazic pe domnisoara) | |